For Oladoyin, i left a comment. Also generally the copy isnt bad, but its just there , because its a sles copy, thats is for a $49 product , we need to make it more compelling. i couldnt see emotional and psychology triggers , it needs to be more raw and to address specific problems , and how the class will solve the specific problems, thinks of ... problem 1 - solution 1 

outside just brand building what are the specific problems brand building will sove for them , relate that to specific modules of what they will learn in the webinar