CORRECTIONS TO BE MADE TO THE SLIDE CONTENT:

Core Marketing Issues:
1.  The Presentation Is Educational ??? Not Agitating Enough
It does not sufficiently amplify:
Fear of collapse
Ego risk
Loss of reputation
Family breakdown
Founder irrelevance
Regret



2. Core Messaging Analysis:
Where It Weakens:
Not enough real-life vivid examples
No strong case studies or breakdown stories
No quantified consequences
No visible ???cost of inaction??? math


She said: ???The cost of a broken structure is millions.???
But it doesn???t show it.
High earners (our audience) respond to:
Concrete loss scenarios
Specific failure patterns
Real consequences

3. Include missing psychological triggers
- Social proofs (testimonials, case studies, before/after structures)
- Urgency amplifications: A small 10% discount will not move high earners. They are moved by opportunity cost, cohort limits and strategic necessity.

4. Work on the offer clarity: Rather than sell modules, sell transformation.
Here is an example:
Instead of:
 ???Weeks 1???2: Clarity & Conversion???
Sell:
 ???By Week 2, you will know exactly how much is enough and what percentage of your income builds assets automatically.???

5. Strategic Marketing Improvements 
A. Add a Diagnostic Opening
Before Module 1, add a 5-question ???Wealth Fragility Test???
Example:
If you step away for 6 months, what breaks?
If you die tomorrow, who decides what?
How many months could your family operate without you?
Are your assets coordinated or scattered?
Does your spouse understand your structure?
This increases emotional engagement.
B. Add a Collapse Story
You can add one anonymized founder case:
Example structure:
???A founder earning ???60M annually died unexpectedly.
 No governance.
 No holding structure.
 3-year legal battle.
 Business revenue dropped 40%.
 Children no longer speak.???
Realistic. Concrete. Uncomfortable.
This moves people.
C. Strengthen the Call to Action
Instead of:
???Join the Wealth Accelerator Coaching Program???
Use:
???If you are serious about installing structure before crisis forces it??????
Language should signal:
Serious people only
Limited capacity
Not for everyone
Exclusivity converts high earners.

6. Include a bio and brand positioning section  for Mrs. Abiola at the beginning.
She should be positioned as a Strategic wealth architect for African founders, and not just a structured wealth educator.
@Asheoluwa Oke